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Universal Misunderstandings
A Fan-Made Multi Publisher Mash-up by Luke Batt
Legend
DB = Dialogue Box
HM = Heart Rate/ Blood Pressure Monitor
Heart Rate (HR)/ Blood Pressure (BP) Monitor Levels
Normal = Green HR 60-100 BP <120/<80
Stressed = Yellow HR 101-160 BP 121-140/81-90
Angry = Red HR 161-200 BP 141-160/91-100
Super Angry = Crazy Red HR 201-300 BP 161-200/101-150
HULK PISSED = Super Crazy Red HR 301+ BP 201+/151+
Starts hulking out at high Stress Levels; can still gain control at high stress levels if being talked down. Fully Hulks out at low Angry levels. Lower IQ and Increased size/power with each anger level.
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Page 1
Panel 1
Establishing shot
Barren alien desert landscape, lost of red dust and mountains. 3 moons in the sky. Centre of the image is a small western style, one road town. In the middle of the road is a person laying down; this is Bruce Banner. Town folk are beginning to surround him, there are also a few hiding behind doors and looking through windows.
HM Normal
Panel 2
Close up shot of Banners eyes, wearing glasses, he is asleep/ unconscious, dust/ red glow from the sky/dust is reflecting.
HM Normal
Panel 3
Close up shot of banners eyes, same as panel 2, but now he is awake, kinda groggy looking, eyes out of focus
HM Normal
Panel 4
Same as Panel 3, but alert and looking at the gathering crowd
DB Banner
What, Where....
Whisper DB Banner
No...
HM Normal to Stressed
Panel 5
Same as Panel 4, but Banner is beginning to Hulk out, skin going green, veins showing in eyes, pupils going green, glasses sliding off
Normal to Angry DB Banner/Hulk
NONONonononononooogrroorRRARARAHHAHAHHHAH!!!
HM Stressed to Angry
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Page 2
Panel 1
Hulk busting out of Banners clothes in the middle of the street, purple pants now showing. People are running in the streets, buildings shaking. We can now see the people, and they are actually an assortment of alien species. This is NOT Earth (duh, 3 moons)
Next to the raging Hulk is the 'Hulk Origin Logo'
Normal to Shaky Angry Text DB Hulk
Leave Hulk ALONE!
Origin Logo Text
After surviving ground zero of the test detonation for the Gamma bomb he invented, renowned physicist, Dr. Bruce Banner, now lives in constant fear and seclusion; for if he loses control of his temper, he turns into the raging and misunderstood monster that is The HULK.
HM Angry
Panels 2-4
Random alien species grabbing sci-fi type weapons (guns and grenades) from gun racks and boxes
HM Angry
Panel 5
Shot from glass height behind a bar in a saloon looking out the door onto the street where Hulk is getting angry as aliens with guns/weapons surround him
HM Angry
Panel 6
Same shot as Panel 5, but now a beer has been slammed down; liquid sloshing, by a thick, hairy hand, part of a brown leather jacket is showing with half an X-Men 'X' showing
DB Logan
Hurmpfff....
You'd think Banner'd be used ta waking up in strange places surrounded by odd looking folks by now...
HM Angry
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Page 3
Panel 1
Shot inside the Saloon, further down the bar, still looking outside, but now shows Logan (Wolverine) in a Brown Leather jacket, blue jeans, wide brimmed hat being put on by one hand, the other waving apologetically to a confused alien barman. Hulk is still angry, turned around from previous panel, more people lined up to fire at him. The 'Wolverine Origin Logo' is shown next to Logan
DB Logan
No offense
DB Barman
*A few words in alien gibberish, saying something like 'I got no beef with you' but complete nonsense*
Origin Logo Text
Born James Howlett of Alberta, Canada in the late 1800s, The X-man, more commonly known as Logan, has suffered countless personal tragedies and survived a multitude of wars all thanks to his mutant healing powers; that allow him to age slowly and recover from even the most severe of wounds, heightened senses and adamantium laced skeleton; including three bone claws on each hand. He helps those he can as he is the Best at what he does, but what Wolverine does, isn't pretty.
HM Angry
Panel 2
Shot looking at Hulk from inside the bar, Logan's shoulder aimed outside as he is about to go out that way, stretching his arms, getting ready for a fight
DB Logan
Guess this is why I woke up here
HM Angry
Panel 3
Same shot as Panel 2, but now a red cape is floating outside, covering most of the Hulk, can only see the bottom of the third to half of the cape itself
DB Logan
Never get to finish a good brew these da...
Hhuhm...
DB Superman
Stand Down Sir
I may be new to town, but I'm sure you're causing these fine folks all sorts of worries
HM Angry
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Page 4
Panel 1
Shot from over the Hulks shoulders aimed towards the sky, he is shaking with rage, some of the aliens in the background are starting to lower their weapons. Superman (in his New-52 DCU Outfit) is floating with a hand up in a loose stop sign, the other hand on his hip, head slightly cocked to the same side of the panel he is drawn on, sun is behind him shining over his shoulders making an almost silhouette out of the image. The 'Superman Origin Logo' is next to him.
DB Superman
I'm not entirely clear on what has you so riled up Sir, but this is your last warning
Please calm down
Angry DB Hulk
HRRRRRRRRRR...
Origin Title Text
Kal-L is the last son of an annihilated alien civilization. Rocketed to Earth as a baby from his destroyed home planet, Krypton; Learning Truth and Justice from his adopted parents on the Kent Family Farm in Smallville, Kansas, U.S.A. The mild mannered Daily Planet reporter; Clark Kent, stands up for the weak and oppressed everywhere in a never-ending battle, as Superman
HM Angry
Panel 2
Shot of a raged out seething Hulk's face, spittle coming out of his mouth as he breaths and makes noises
Angry DB Hulk
HRRRRRRRRRRRR...
HM Angry to almost Super Angry
Panel 3
Close up shot of Superman's head and shoulders, stern look on his face
DB Superman
Or I'll calm you down
HM almost Super Angry
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Page 5
Panel 1
Shot of the Hulk, fists clenched, spittle coming from his mouth. Superman is floating above, looking down, hands on hips, head cocked in opposite direction from the last shot of him. Saloon in the background, Logan is leaning on a post, lighting a cigar, head down (wearing his hat), people have stepped back and most have lowered their guns, Tumble weed is just about to bounce past the front of the Saloon
Angry DB Hulk
Leave Hulk ALONE! (The Font and art lines are shaking the the epicenter that is 'Alone!')
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Same shot as panel 1, but now Superman is punching Hulk in the guts, Hulks arm have barely moved other than over with his torso. Superman's left foot is planted forward, left fist cocked back, cape flowing on the ground behind him. In the background Logan is throwing a match (it's in mid-flight) and half looking away (he has barely notices Superman move), the tumbleweed has barely moved
DB Hulk
Hughh..
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats, Superman is in Superspeed mode for the next few panels
Panel 3
Same shot as Panel 2, but Superman has moved into an uppercut, Hulk's head is cocked back and he is standing upright with a slight lean back, but not that far, shoulders are angled back too. In the background Logan, the match and the tumbleweed have barely if even moved. Superman is floating a little in order to land the impactful punch on Hulks jaw, Hulks right foot has moved back a few inches to support him
DB Hulk
Heahhh...
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
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Page 6
Panel's 1-3
Superman, floating (not necessarily shown but Hulk is about 2.5-3 m tall vs Supermans 2 m, all vs Logans 1.6ish m), Hulk and Superman are now the same head height, and Supes is punching Hulk in the Chest, Right, Left, Right.
DB Hulk
Urgh...
Oghff...
Ffrggh..
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
Panel's 4-6
Show Hulks feet (and supes cape), Hulks feet are sliding backwards, Logan/ Match and Tumbleweed barely moved
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
Panel 7
Superman has grabbed Hulks shoulders and kneed him in the guts
DB Hulk
Arghh...
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
Panel 8
Superman has pushed Hulk's body back up and has done a right hook to Hulk's head, Hulks mouth is open and floppy, spittle and blood flying from it
DB Hulk
Ffff...
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
Panel 9
Same kind of shot as panel 8 but a left hook to Hulk's head
DB Hulk
Uhhhghh...
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
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Page 7
Panel 1
Hulk has caught Superman's swing, can see half of the Hulk's face, hand is in front 'crushing' Superman's hand
DB Hulk
Puny flying Man make Hulk...
HM Angry almost to Super Angry
Panel 2
Low shot angled towards the sky, see the back of Hulk as he is finishing a punch on Superman, Supes is flying off into the distance
SFX
THOOOOM!
Angry DB Hulk
ANGRY!
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Orbital Space shot, see a blue/red streak flying straight away from the planet
Remember, it's an Alien planet with 3 moons.
Op the opposite side of the planet have a small 'Fear Agent' portal opening up with Heath's ship flying out
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Page 8
Panel 1
Hulk screaming with an angry face, his body has spun to face the locals that have picked up their guns again
Angry DB Hulk
RAHRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Logan sucking/ puffing on the cigar, hat raised just above his eyes, head slightly cocked, Saloon in background
DB Logan
Guess the Boy Scout couldn't hack it...
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Logan walking towards the Hulk, Hulk has turned towards Logan, Logan has flicked the cigar to the ground (it's in mid-air)
HM Super Angry
Panel 4
The cigar has bounced, only show the cigar bouncing and ash falling off
SFX
SNIKT!
HM Super Angry
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Page 9
Panel 1
Logan hunched forward running towards us, hat flying off, claws popped, angry face
Angry DB Logan
ARRRRRRRRR!!!
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
A commanding type alien screaming while looking over the other misc aliens with weapons, his gun is raised high
Angry DB *Alien Gibberish*!!! (Screaming 'fire')
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Logan's back is facing us, he is leaping at the Hulk, legs kinda spread, one a little higher than the other, arms same but opposite side in higher, his jump isn't as high as the Hulk is tall, can see the Hulks face above Logan's head. Laser fire is flying all over the place, some hitting the Hulk.
HM Super Angry
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Page 10
Panel 1
Side view of the two rivals, Logan now standing on Hulks chest with his claws dug in
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Hulk's face in pain and anger
Angry DB Hulk
ARRRRRR!
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Hulk swings at Logan, but has missed, Logan has dropped to the ground and sliced at the Hulks ankles. Lasers taking chunks out of Hulk AND Logan now
HM Super Angry
Panel 4
Now Logan is on Hulk's back and taking slice after slice at him, lots of claw marks, he has attacked a few times quite quickly. Hulk stumbling around grabbing for Logan
HM Super Angry
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Page 11
Panel 1
Hulk has stumbled towards the aliens firing at him/ then Logan still hacking, Hulks arms have swung to opposite side to last panel. Aliens jumping out of the way. There are boxes for cover nearby
Angry DB Hulk
RARRRRRRR!
Angry DB Logan
Grrrrrr!
DB Aliens
*Alien Gibberish* (Ahh!)
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Aliens opening box to display grenades, hand grabbing for one, Hulk and Logan fighting in the background in the lids reflection
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Alien with cocked back arm about to throw grenade
SFX Bleep. . . Bleep. . . Bleep. . .
HM Super Angry
Panel 4
Grenade lands at Hulks feet, both Hulk and Logan see it, they are surrounded by aliens, annoyed looks on their faces (Hulk/ Logan), Logan has a hand out, blood/ gore hanging from his claws, Aliens are scared/ shocked/ stunned (most of them)
Shocked DB Logan
Run!
SFX Bleep. . Bleep. . Bleep. . Bleep. . Bleep. . Bleep. .
HM Super Angry down to Angry
Panel 5
Hulk and Logan share a look (they're going to protect the aliens as best they can)
SFX Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep.
HM Angry
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Page 12
Panel 1
Hulk covers a bunch of aliens, arms surrounding them, he is right next to the grenade and Logan has dived off Hulk into a few aliens knocking them all over some boxes for cover, gore flying behind him. A few aliens managed to Run far enough away
DB Logan
DOWN!
SFX BleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleep
HM Angry
Panel 2
EXPLOSION !!!!!!!!
Shot from top of building, all the cover is being blown away/ up, and the front of the Saloon has been destroyed. A silhouette of Hulk and Logan covering the aliens, chunks of skin being blasted away and the explosion is A LOT bigger than they expected..... it's ALIEN
SFX KA-KRAKA-BOOOOOOOOOOOOM!
HM Angry
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Page 13
Panel 1
Hulk's eyes are closed, fire/ explosion is happening
HM Angry
Panel 2
Hulk's eyes are open, smoke, looking for aliens
HM Angry
Panel 3
Hulk eyes open, he can see the aliens, he is sad (they're all ash and/or burnt corpses)
HM Angry
Panel 4
Hulk Angry eyes
HM Angry to Super Angry
Panel 5
Hulk has spun to the person who threw the grenade and is screaming. At the Hulk's feet are the burnt corpses/ husks. The alien that threw it has fallen and is trying to move back, on the side you can see a burnt metal skeleton showing Logan, lying on-top of a pile of corpses, the cover is mostly destroyed, debris everywhere
Angry DB Hulk
RaHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
HM Super Angry
Panel 6
Hulk does a ground slam at the alien, ripping the ground apart, dust/ debris flying up
Angry DB Hulk
HULK SMASH!!!
HM Super Angry
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Page 14
Panel 1
Hul has spun to LoGan, who is still lying down, a little more regenerated
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Hulk yelling (looking at logan)
Angry DB Hulk
Rahhhh!
Normal DB Hulk
Hffff (breathing noise)
HM Super Angry to Angry
Panel 3
Hulk leaps off into the distance. The regenerating Logan is in the shot.
Sfx BOOM!
Panel 4
Logan comes up to his hands and knees, Hulk is really small, further off in the distance. Logan gripping his side, holding partially charred entrails in on the left side of his body with his right arm.
Wounded DB Logan
Ah!
HM Angry
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Page 15
Panel 1
Logan stumbling around, one hand gripping side while side heals, other hand holding him up, he is F.U.C.K.E.D. U.P. Skeleton showing, leg dragging (no muscles in thigh)
Normal DB Logan
Always itchy…
Ugh… Where is it…
HM Angry
Panel 2
Relieved look on Logan's mangled face
HM Angry
Panel 3
Logan's messed up hand reaching for a cigar
Normal DB Logan
Ahhhhh…
HM Angry
Panel 4
Logan sitting down on a crate, surrounded by broken/charred bodies, lighting the cigar
SFX Chick Chick (sound of a lighter being struck)
HM Angry
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Page 16
Panel 1
Logan puffing on the cigar, more healed than last panel
HM Angry
Panel 2
Logans face relaxed blowing smoke, wincing a little as the fibres in his face heal
HM Angry
Panel 3
Logan looking to top left of the panel (same image as Panel 2 but more healing has happened), he has a slightly annoyed look on his face
SFX Whatever sound Angstrom Levies portals makes (look it up Luke!)
Normal DB Logan
What now…
HM Angry
Panel 4
See Logan look to the sky, angle shot from lower than Logan aimed diagonally up towards sky with building in background on the side, sky in the middle of the background, can see a Green 'Portal' has opened, on the opposite side you see Invinciblie's hand (one of them) and a silhouette in the portal of the rest of the arm up to his elbow and his other arm, They are outstretched as if trying to grab someone.
Angry DB Invincible
…GSTROM!
HM Angry
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Page 17
Panel 1
(2/3 Page)
Invincible floating, has come to a sudden halt, Portal smaller, show the Invincible 'Origin Title Logo' (up to Vol. 7). Angled down shot from about Invincible, can see Logan below.
DB Invincible
Damn it!
Invincible Origin Title Logo Text
Half-Human, Half-Viltrumite, he is the son of one of the worlds most powerful Superheroes; Omni-Man. Possessing super strength, speed, the power of flight, slow aging and absolutely no special hearing or sight, Mark Grayson is INVINCIBLE.
HM Angry (low)
Panel 2
Invincible's face, shocked
Normal DB Invincible
Wait!
HM Angry (low)
Panel 3
Portal closed
Normal DB Invincible
Maaaaaaan!
HM Angry (low)
Panel 4
Invincible looking down, shocked look on his face
Shocked DB Invincible
WHAT THE!
HM Angry (low)
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Page 18
Panel 1
Shot of Logan looking up, holding his hat to block the sun, squinting in annoyance/ pain/ curiosity, still sitting on the crate. Ground littered with bodies.
Normal DB Logan
Really not in the mood for…
HM Angry (low)
Panel 2
Same shot as Panel 1, only now there is a motion blur, paper/ dust/ debris and remaining clothing on bodies has moved as Invincible has swooped down and picked up Logan, neither are in the panel as he has done it so quickly.
SFX Wooooosh
HM Angry (low)
Panel 3
Shot looking down towards the ground, they are REALLY high up, Invincible holding Logan from under his arm pits, make it look kind of disorientating if possible
Normal DB Logan
…this
Angry DB Invincible
What have you DONE!
DB Logan
Anyone ever told you, you rush to conclusions bub…
…. And holding a guy like this is really uncomfortable
HM Angry (low)
Panel 4
Shot of a stone cold Invincible face
HM Angry (low)
Panel 5
Shot of a pissed off Logan face, shoulders near his ears because of how he is being held
Normal DB Logan
Now put me down, before I FORCE us down
HM Angry (low)
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Page 19
Panel 1
Annoyed/ confused/ angry look on Invincible's face
Normal DB Invincible
From this height you'd just kill yourself
Normal DB Logan
3…
HM Angry (low)
Panel 2
Pissed off look on Logan's face, almost fully healed now
Normal DB Invincible
Besides I doubt there's anything you could do to hurt me
Normal DB Logan
2…
HM Angry (low)
Panel 3
Smug look on Invincible's face
Normal DB Invincible
I'm guess you don't know, but I'm…
Normal DB Logan
1…
HM Angry (low)
Panel 4
Logan has a look of pain on his face as he has tried to stab Invincible with his claws (all six of them), but they have only caused a scratch and now they are protruding through the back of Logan's forearms as they have been pushed back into Logan incorrectly. A surprised look on Invincible's face. Looking side on, we can see the height thanks to the background scenery, slightly angled down from above Logan, his head is tilted back to show his face, has tried to stab invincible at rib height
Normal DB Invincible
… Invincible
Angry DB Logan
ARHHHHHHH!
SFX SNIKT!
HM Angry (low)
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Page 20
Panel 1
Invincible, confused/ shocked, Logan's arms are dangling, blood is pouring from the wounds, claws slowly sliding out and back into place as they heal
Normal DB Invincible
Geez man, what're you doing! That almost hurt! Are you trying to fall to your death?
Wounded DB Logan
*Pant* I'm *Pant* Tougher than I look *Pant*
HM Normal
Panel 2
Logan has brought his feet up to Invincible's chest
Normal DB Invincible
Huh?
HM Normal
Panel 3
Long draw distance, Logan has jumped out of Invincible's grasp and is falling backwards to the ground, blood still falling to the ground. Invincible is covered in blood as well.
Wounded DB Logan
*grunt*
HM Normal
Panel 4
Same shot as Panel 3, but a streak of blue and red has shot across the panel on a diagonal arc and taken Logan with it, Invincible is still floating in the same place.
SFX Fssshhhhh
HM Normal
Panel 5
Logan being placed down by a hunched over Superman, Logan's arms look mostly healed now, just severe bruising and a bit of raw/ still healing skin here and there. Superman is looking skywards.
Normal DB Superman
If you can hold out, I'll be back soon
Normal DB Logan
Wha…?
HM Normal
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Page 21
Panel 1
Long draw distance, can see Logan on the ground and a shot of red and blue streaking into the sky towards Invincible. Blood still falling and at the top of the streak is the torso of Superman with one arm thrust forward and the other in a cocked position by his side.
HM Normal
Panel 2
Superman uppercutting Invincible, pieces of Invincibles glasses go flying into the air, his mouth spraying saliva and blood
SFX
CRRrrrrrrRRACK!
Normal DB Invincible
Opfhh!
HM Normal
Panel 3
Superman's torso looking at us, finger pointing, angry look on his face, think Uncle Sam wants YOU but with Superman.
Angry DB Superman
So you defeated the the green hulking monster, destroyed the town and were about to send that poor man fall to his death. I don't know what game you are playing sir, but it ends now.
HM Normal
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Page 22
Panel 1
Shocked looked on a close up of Invincible's face
Normal DB Invincible
Whaaa...?
HM Normal
Panel 2
Side view of Superman attacking Invincible, right arm extended, left arm cocked, looks like he has pushed forward from a running stance, cape flying back, Invincible has dodged the blow and is flying backwards
SFX
Foooosh
HM Normal
Panel 3
Shot from below Logan looking up, we can see Logan has mostly healed and has found his cigar and has light it, above him in the sky is a blur of red and blue swirling with blue and yellow
HM Normal
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Page 23
Panel 1
Invincible has thrown an Uppercut squarely into Supermans abdomen.
Normal DB Superman
Ooopfhhh!
HM Normal
Panel 2
Invincible has now done a downward punch into S's neck
Normal DB Invincible
YARRRHHH!!
HM Normal
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Page 24
Panel 1
Long distance view, a red and blue streak straight into the ground with a puff of dust, Invincible in the position of only just having hit S.
HM Normal
Panel 2
Invincible's silhouette above Superman trying to crawl out of the crater
Normal DB Invincible
I don't know who or where we are, but I don't know who you are talking about and I don't want to fight you!
HM Normal
Panel 3
A crouched Logan, claws popped, smoke flying around, covering the necessary parts
Normal DB Logan
Sucks to be you then Bub
HM Normal
Panel 4
Logan has begun slashing at Invincible, by this shot he has already landed several blows ripping Invincibles uniform in several places and leaving paper cut claw marks on his skin
Angry DB Logan
RARRHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
SFX
Shink! ShinkShinkShink! Shink!
HM Normal
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Page 25
Panel 1
Superman has flown in between the two fighting men, a hand on each mans chest
Normal DB Superman
ENOUGH!
HM Normal
Panel 2
Logan and Invincible have backed up, all 3 are looking like they are ready to do battle once more
Normal DB Logan
Hmmm, Where about are you jokers from? I don't recognize the getups
HM Normal
Panel 3
Close up of Superman's face, calm now, looking left
Normal DB Superman
I'm Superman, from Metropolis. I WAS doing battle with one of my enemies Mister Mxyzptlk, when suddenly there was a flash of light and I was floating above your planet and town here
HM Normal
Panel 4
Close up of Invincible's face, calmer now, one broken eye lense and claw marks on his face, looking right
Normal DB Invincible
Umm, Earth, but this doesn't look like home, I figure I'm stuck here until Angstrom Levy pulls me back and sends me to another dimension, he's trying to wear me down... it's not working, and neither of you are going to do much about that... What about you Short Round n' Spikey
HM Normal
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Page 26
Panel 1
Closeup of Logan's face, cigar in between 2 finger's with smoke coming out of his mouth as he speaks
Normal DB
Bub, you don't wanna know much about me, but I'm a mutant, an X-man from up-state New York and that guy the boy scout here was duking it out with when he turned up was the Hulk; Bruce Banner, ugly mess of a problem when he gets pissed, who knows where he's gone now, but I can smell him from here, he's not that far away, we'd better go get him and work out what's happening around here before the locals start getting annoyed we trashed their town
HM Normal
Panel 2
Logan pulling on some new pants he has picked up from the rubble, Superman standing with his arms crossed and Invincible straightening his gloves
Normal DB Superman
Well, I can see him from here, he seems to have calmed down quite a bit... wait... do you hear that?
HM Normal
Panel 3
Long distance shot from atop a rocky mountain range, town in the distance, above the sky a classic style rocket flys past
Normal DB Invincible
I don't have super hearing
Normal DB Logan
Neither, what is it Supes?
HM Normal
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Page 27
Panel 1
Superman looking up, Logan doing up his old belt, cigar in mouth, hat on head
Normal DB Superman
More guests I'm guessing
HM Normal
Panel 2
Most of the page, the rocket lands on the mountain range overlooking the town
VFX
Rumble, ground shaking
HM Normal
Panel 3
Door open and the ladder extended
HM Normal
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Page 28
Panel 1
Superman looking towards the mountain range, Invincible prepared to fight and Logan scratching his hairy chest while puffing away on the cigar
Normal DB Superman
I think I'll go say hello to the new arrival, stay here, I'll be right back
HM Normal
Panel 2
Shot of the bottom of the ship and the ground with a pair of the Fear Agent's boots in the shot surrounded in a cloud of dust, in the background you can see the red and blue streak leading to Superman flying towards us.
HM Normal
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Page 29
Panel 1
The landed rocket ship, the rocky cliff and Heath Hudson standing looking prepared for anything, gun drawn, suit on, in the door frame is a computer monitor with Annie on screen
Normal DB Heath
Annie, any idea where we are now?
Fear Agent Origin Title Logo Text
Supposedly the last FEAR AGENT, Heath Hudson is a rugged, alcoholic Texan spaceman on the run from the powers that laid waste to his Home, his Family and his Planet. He works as an exterminator, taking care of the things that go bump in the night so you... or the aliens that hire him, don't have too.
HM Normal
Panel 2
Close up on Heath's head, the gun is sticking up in shot
Normal DB Superman
Welcome, I do hope you have come in peace, is this a place you call home or are you stranded here as well?
Normal DB Heath
Huh?
HM Normal
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Page 30
Panel 1
Heath looking up at a floating Superman, confused look on his face, gun hap-hazardly pointing in S's direction
Normal DB
Yeaaaahhh, I don't think so... Annie, fire up the engines, we need to be outta here 10 minutes ago
HM Normal
Panel 2
Heath scampering up the ladder, Superman just floating
SFX
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh
HM Normal
Panel 3
Superman floating in the same spot, cape and hair flapping in the blast, but the shot is from a downward angle further back and up and the rocket blasts off
SFX
Roooooaaaaaarrrrrr!
HM Normal
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Page 31
Panel 1
Heath's rocket is flying up towards space, it's path leaves a trail through the clouds below
Normal DB Heath
Annie, get us the hell outta here! I did not get paid today to go up against flying spacemen from unknown planets
Normal DB Annie
Baby, the least you could have done was ask where we were, now you're just going to get drunk and leave me with the mess to clean up
Normal DB Heath
That's why I love ya you beautiful AI
HM Normal
Panel 2
Same shot, but now Heath's rocket is flying high above the planet, and is dodging a new purple, domed half destroyed and on fire spacecraft that has appeared out of nowhere, yellowy-green dusty debris is falling off is as it hurtles toward the ground
Normal DB Heath
What is the blue blazes!
Normal DB Annie
It appears to be another ship, it seems to have appeared out of some form or hyper-dimensional portal, attempting to hail now
HM Normal
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Page 32
Panel 1
Back on the planet, atop the mountain range opposite the one Superman is still floating above and where Heath's rocket just left. A Golden Shimmering figure appears with two golden circles above and below him
Normal DB Master Chief
Cortana, where are we?
Normal DB Cortana
I don't know Chief, but I suggest you get ready, we were followed, and I'm picking up life signs below
HM Normal
Panel 2
Full shot of Master Chief, gun in hand, back to the town atop the mountain range, looking up and overhead the Covenant ship is crash landing while spewing wreckage and flood spores in a debris trail as it heads towards the planet
Normal DB Master Chief
Friend or Foe?
Normal DB Cortana
Unknown, attempting to interface with local frequencies and satellite uplinks. I suggest recon and Minimal contact until we know more.
Halo Origin Title Logo Text
John 117 is the Master Chief. Believed to be the sole survivor of the UNSC's Spartan 2 project from the Planet Reach. Stolen by Dr Catherine Halsey as a 5 year old child and trained to be a soldier more capable than an entire army, he is on a mission to infiltrate and capture a Covenant ship vital to saving Earth from a galaxy spanning threat and stop multi-year war. Aided by the Smart AI clone of Dr Halsey herself, the AI named Cortana is the Master Chief's on-board intelligence gathering partner, together they must complete their mission no matter the costs, having been trapped the last 3 months on the ring-world called Halo fighting all manner of enemies, they have found themselves teleported here by what appears to be mistake.
HM Normal
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Page 33
Panel 1
Shot from behind the Hulk, who is sitting, hurtling towards him from in front and above is the Covenant ship
HM Normal
Panel 2
Long distance shot. The Ship has an explosive landing atop the Hulk
HM HULK PISSED
A Fan-Made Multi Publisher Mash-up by Luke Batt
Legend
DB = Dialogue Box
HM = Heart Rate/ Blood Pressure Monitor
Heart Rate (HR)/ Blood Pressure (BP) Monitor Levels
Normal = Green HR 60-100 BP <120/<80
Stressed = Yellow HR 101-160 BP 121-140/81-90
Angry = Red HR 161-200 BP 141-160/91-100
Super Angry = Crazy Red HR 201-300 BP 161-200/101-150
HULK PISSED = Super Crazy Red HR 301+ BP 201+/151+
Starts hulking out at high Stress Levels; can still gain control at high stress levels if being talked down. Fully Hulks out at low Angry levels. Lower IQ and Increased size/power with each anger level.
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Page 1
Panel 1
Establishing shot
Barren alien desert landscape, lost of red dust and mountains. 3 moons in the sky. Centre of the image is a small western style, one road town. In the middle of the road is a person laying down; this is Bruce Banner. Town folk are beginning to surround him, there are also a few hiding behind doors and looking through windows.
HM Normal
Panel 2
Close up shot of Banners eyes, wearing glasses, he is asleep/ unconscious, dust/ red glow from the sky/dust is reflecting.
HM Normal
Panel 3
Close up shot of banners eyes, same as panel 2, but now he is awake, kinda groggy looking, eyes out of focus
HM Normal
Panel 4
Same as Panel 3, but alert and looking at the gathering crowd
DB Banner
What, Where....
Whisper DB Banner
No...
HM Normal to Stressed
Panel 5
Same as Panel 4, but Banner is beginning to Hulk out, skin going green, veins showing in eyes, pupils going green, glasses sliding off
Normal to Angry DB Banner/Hulk
NONONonononononooogrroorRRARARAHHAHAHHHAH!!!
HM Stressed to Angry
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Page 2
Panel 1
Hulk busting out of Banners clothes in the middle of the street, purple pants now showing. People are running in the streets, buildings shaking. We can now see the people, and they are actually an assortment of alien species. This is NOT Earth (duh, 3 moons)
Next to the raging Hulk is the 'Hulk Origin Logo'
Normal to Shaky Angry Text DB Hulk
Leave Hulk ALONE!
Origin Logo Text
After surviving ground zero of the test detonation for the Gamma bomb he invented, renowned physicist, Dr. Bruce Banner, now lives in constant fear and seclusion; for if he loses control of his temper, he turns into the raging and misunderstood monster that is The HULK.
HM Angry
Panels 2-4
Random alien species grabbing sci-fi type weapons (guns and grenades) from gun racks and boxes
HM Angry
Panel 5
Shot from glass height behind a bar in a saloon looking out the door onto the street where Hulk is getting angry as aliens with guns/weapons surround him
HM Angry
Panel 6
Same shot as Panel 5, but now a beer has been slammed down; liquid sloshing, by a thick, hairy hand, part of a brown leather jacket is showing with half an X-Men 'X' showing
DB Logan
Hurmpfff....
You'd think Banner'd be used ta waking up in strange places surrounded by odd looking folks by now...
HM Angry
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Page 3
Panel 1
Shot inside the Saloon, further down the bar, still looking outside, but now shows Logan (Wolverine) in a Brown Leather jacket, blue jeans, wide brimmed hat being put on by one hand, the other waving apologetically to a confused alien barman. Hulk is still angry, turned around from previous panel, more people lined up to fire at him. The 'Wolverine Origin Logo' is shown next to Logan
DB Logan
No offense
DB Barman
*A few words in alien gibberish, saying something like 'I got no beef with you' but complete nonsense*
Origin Logo Text
Born James Howlett of Alberta, Canada in the late 1800s, The X-man, more commonly known as Logan, has suffered countless personal tragedies and survived a multitude of wars all thanks to his mutant healing powers; that allow him to age slowly and recover from even the most severe of wounds, heightened senses and adamantium laced skeleton; including three bone claws on each hand. He helps those he can as he is the Best at what he does, but what Wolverine does, isn't pretty.
HM Angry
Panel 2
Shot looking at Hulk from inside the bar, Logan's shoulder aimed outside as he is about to go out that way, stretching his arms, getting ready for a fight
DB Logan
Guess this is why I woke up here
HM Angry
Panel 3
Same shot as Panel 2, but now a red cape is floating outside, covering most of the Hulk, can only see the bottom of the third to half of the cape itself
DB Logan
Never get to finish a good brew these da...
Hhuhm...
DB Superman
Stand Down Sir
I may be new to town, but I'm sure you're causing these fine folks all sorts of worries
HM Angry
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Page 4
Panel 1
Shot from over the Hulks shoulders aimed towards the sky, he is shaking with rage, some of the aliens in the background are starting to lower their weapons. Superman (in his New-52 DCU Outfit) is floating with a hand up in a loose stop sign, the other hand on his hip, head slightly cocked to the same side of the panel he is drawn on, sun is behind him shining over his shoulders making an almost silhouette out of the image. The 'Superman Origin Logo' is next to him.
DB Superman
I'm not entirely clear on what has you so riled up Sir, but this is your last warning
Please calm down
Angry DB Hulk
HRRRRRRRRRR...
Origin Title Text
Kal-L is the last son of an annihilated alien civilization. Rocketed to Earth as a baby from his destroyed home planet, Krypton; Learning Truth and Justice from his adopted parents on the Kent Family Farm in Smallville, Kansas, U.S.A. The mild mannered Daily Planet reporter; Clark Kent, stands up for the weak and oppressed everywhere in a never-ending battle, as Superman
HM Angry
Panel 2
Shot of a raged out seething Hulk's face, spittle coming out of his mouth as he breaths and makes noises
Angry DB Hulk
HRRRRRRRRRRRR...
HM Angry to almost Super Angry
Panel 3
Close up shot of Superman's head and shoulders, stern look on his face
DB Superman
Or I'll calm you down
HM almost Super Angry
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Page 5
Panel 1
Shot of the Hulk, fists clenched, spittle coming from his mouth. Superman is floating above, looking down, hands on hips, head cocked in opposite direction from the last shot of him. Saloon in the background, Logan is leaning on a post, lighting a cigar, head down (wearing his hat), people have stepped back and most have lowered their guns, Tumble weed is just about to bounce past the front of the Saloon
Angry DB Hulk
Leave Hulk ALONE! (The Font and art lines are shaking the the epicenter that is 'Alone!')
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Same shot as panel 1, but now Superman is punching Hulk in the guts, Hulks arm have barely moved other than over with his torso. Superman's left foot is planted forward, left fist cocked back, cape flowing on the ground behind him. In the background Logan is throwing a match (it's in mid-flight) and half looking away (he has barely notices Superman move), the tumbleweed has barely moved
DB Hulk
Hughh..
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats, Superman is in Superspeed mode for the next few panels
Panel 3
Same shot as Panel 2, but Superman has moved into an uppercut, Hulk's head is cocked back and he is standing upright with a slight lean back, but not that far, shoulders are angled back too. In the background Logan, the match and the tumbleweed have barely if even moved. Superman is floating a little in order to land the impactful punch on Hulks jaw, Hulks right foot has moved back a few inches to support him
DB Hulk
Heahhh...
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
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Page 6
Panel's 1-3
Superman, floating (not necessarily shown but Hulk is about 2.5-3 m tall vs Supermans 2 m, all vs Logans 1.6ish m), Hulk and Superman are now the same head height, and Supes is punching Hulk in the Chest, Right, Left, Right.
DB Hulk
Urgh...
Oghff...
Ffrggh..
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
Panel's 4-6
Show Hulks feet (and supes cape), Hulks feet are sliding backwards, Logan/ Match and Tumbleweed barely moved
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
Panel 7
Superman has grabbed Hulks shoulders and kneed him in the guts
DB Hulk
Arghh...
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
Panel 8
Superman has pushed Hulk's body back up and has done a right hook to Hulk's head, Hulks mouth is open and floppy, spittle and blood flying from it
DB Hulk
Ffff...
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
Panel 9
Same kind of shot as panel 8 but a left hook to Hulk's head
DB Hulk
Uhhhghh...
HM Super Angry but really drawn out, only 1 or 2 heart beats
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Page 7
Panel 1
Hulk has caught Superman's swing, can see half of the Hulk's face, hand is in front 'crushing' Superman's hand
DB Hulk
Puny flying Man make Hulk...
HM Angry almost to Super Angry
Panel 2
Low shot angled towards the sky, see the back of Hulk as he is finishing a punch on Superman, Supes is flying off into the distance
SFX
THOOOOM!
Angry DB Hulk
ANGRY!
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Orbital Space shot, see a blue/red streak flying straight away from the planet
Remember, it's an Alien planet with 3 moons.
Op the opposite side of the planet have a small 'Fear Agent' portal opening up with Heath's ship flying out
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Page 8
Panel 1
Hulk screaming with an angry face, his body has spun to face the locals that have picked up their guns again
Angry DB Hulk
RAHRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Logan sucking/ puffing on the cigar, hat raised just above his eyes, head slightly cocked, Saloon in background
DB Logan
Guess the Boy Scout couldn't hack it...
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Logan walking towards the Hulk, Hulk has turned towards Logan, Logan has flicked the cigar to the ground (it's in mid-air)
HM Super Angry
Panel 4
The cigar has bounced, only show the cigar bouncing and ash falling off
SFX
SNIKT!
HM Super Angry
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Page 9
Panel 1
Logan hunched forward running towards us, hat flying off, claws popped, angry face
Angry DB Logan
ARRRRRRRRR!!!
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
A commanding type alien screaming while looking over the other misc aliens with weapons, his gun is raised high
Angry DB *Alien Gibberish*!!! (Screaming 'fire')
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Logan's back is facing us, he is leaping at the Hulk, legs kinda spread, one a little higher than the other, arms same but opposite side in higher, his jump isn't as high as the Hulk is tall, can see the Hulks face above Logan's head. Laser fire is flying all over the place, some hitting the Hulk.
HM Super Angry
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Page 10
Panel 1
Side view of the two rivals, Logan now standing on Hulks chest with his claws dug in
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Hulk's face in pain and anger
Angry DB Hulk
ARRRRRR!
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Hulk swings at Logan, but has missed, Logan has dropped to the ground and sliced at the Hulks ankles. Lasers taking chunks out of Hulk AND Logan now
HM Super Angry
Panel 4
Now Logan is on Hulk's back and taking slice after slice at him, lots of claw marks, he has attacked a few times quite quickly. Hulk stumbling around grabbing for Logan
HM Super Angry
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Page 11
Panel 1
Hulk has stumbled towards the aliens firing at him/ then Logan still hacking, Hulks arms have swung to opposite side to last panel. Aliens jumping out of the way. There are boxes for cover nearby
Angry DB Hulk
RARRRRRRR!
Angry DB Logan
Grrrrrr!
DB Aliens
*Alien Gibberish* (Ahh!)
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Aliens opening box to display grenades, hand grabbing for one, Hulk and Logan fighting in the background in the lids reflection
HM Super Angry
Panel 3
Alien with cocked back arm about to throw grenade
SFX Bleep. . . Bleep. . . Bleep. . .
HM Super Angry
Panel 4
Grenade lands at Hulks feet, both Hulk and Logan see it, they are surrounded by aliens, annoyed looks on their faces (Hulk/ Logan), Logan has a hand out, blood/ gore hanging from his claws, Aliens are scared/ shocked/ stunned (most of them)
Shocked DB Logan
Run!
SFX Bleep. . Bleep. . Bleep. . Bleep. . Bleep. . Bleep. .
HM Super Angry down to Angry
Panel 5
Hulk and Logan share a look (they're going to protect the aliens as best they can)
SFX Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep. Bleep.
HM Angry
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Page 12
Panel 1
Hulk covers a bunch of aliens, arms surrounding them, he is right next to the grenade and Logan has dived off Hulk into a few aliens knocking them all over some boxes for cover, gore flying behind him. A few aliens managed to Run far enough away
DB Logan
DOWN!
SFX BleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleepBleep
HM Angry
Panel 2
EXPLOSION !!!!!!!!
Shot from top of building, all the cover is being blown away/ up, and the front of the Saloon has been destroyed. A silhouette of Hulk and Logan covering the aliens, chunks of skin being blasted away and the explosion is A LOT bigger than they expected..... it's ALIEN
SFX KA-KRAKA-BOOOOOOOOOOOOM!
HM Angry
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Page 13
Panel 1
Hulk's eyes are closed, fire/ explosion is happening
HM Angry
Panel 2
Hulk's eyes are open, smoke, looking for aliens
HM Angry
Panel 3
Hulk eyes open, he can see the aliens, he is sad (they're all ash and/or burnt corpses)
HM Angry
Panel 4
Hulk Angry eyes
HM Angry to Super Angry
Panel 5
Hulk has spun to the person who threw the grenade and is screaming. At the Hulk's feet are the burnt corpses/ husks. The alien that threw it has fallen and is trying to move back, on the side you can see a burnt metal skeleton showing Logan, lying on-top of a pile of corpses, the cover is mostly destroyed, debris everywhere
Angry DB Hulk
RaHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
HM Super Angry
Panel 6
Hulk does a ground slam at the alien, ripping the ground apart, dust/ debris flying up
Angry DB Hulk
HULK SMASH!!!
HM Super Angry
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Page 14
Panel 1
Hul has spun to LoGan, who is still lying down, a little more regenerated
HM Super Angry
Panel 2
Hulk yelling (looking at logan)
Angry DB Hulk
Rahhhh!
Normal DB Hulk
Hffff (breathing noise)
HM Super Angry to Angry
Panel 3
Hulk leaps off into the distance. The regenerating Logan is in the shot.
Sfx BOOM!
Panel 4
Logan comes up to his hands and knees, Hulk is really small, further off in the distance. Logan gripping his side, holding partially charred entrails in on the left side of his body with his right arm.
Wounded DB Logan
Ah!
HM Angry
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Page 15
Panel 1
Logan stumbling around, one hand gripping side while side heals, other hand holding him up, he is F.U.C.K.E.D. U.P. Skeleton showing, leg dragging (no muscles in thigh)
Normal DB Logan
Always itchy…
Ugh… Where is it…
HM Angry
Panel 2
Relieved look on Logan's mangled face
HM Angry
Panel 3
Logan's messed up hand reaching for a cigar
Normal DB Logan
Ahhhhh…
HM Angry
Panel 4
Logan sitting down on a crate, surrounded by broken/charred bodies, lighting the cigar
SFX Chick Chick (sound of a lighter being struck)
HM Angry
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Page 16
Panel 1
Logan puffing on the cigar, more healed than last panel
HM Angry
Panel 2
Logans face relaxed blowing smoke, wincing a little as the fibres in his face heal
HM Angry
Panel 3
Logan looking to top left of the panel (same image as Panel 2 but more healing has happened), he has a slightly annoyed look on his face
SFX Whatever sound Angstrom Levies portals makes (look it up Luke!)
Normal DB Logan
What now…
HM Angry
Panel 4
See Logan look to the sky, angle shot from lower than Logan aimed diagonally up towards sky with building in background on the side, sky in the middle of the background, can see a Green 'Portal' has opened, on the opposite side you see Invinciblie's hand (one of them) and a silhouette in the portal of the rest of the arm up to his elbow and his other arm, They are outstretched as if trying to grab someone.
Angry DB Invincible
…GSTROM!
HM Angry
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Page 17
Panel 1
(2/3 Page)
Invincible floating, has come to a sudden halt, Portal smaller, show the Invincible 'Origin Title Logo' (up to Vol. 7). Angled down shot from about Invincible, can see Logan below.
DB Invincible
Damn it!
Invincible Origin Title Logo Text
Half-Human, Half-Viltrumite, he is the son of one of the worlds most powerful Superheroes; Omni-Man. Possessing super strength, speed, the power of flight, slow aging and absolutely no special hearing or sight, Mark Grayson is INVINCIBLE.
HM Angry (low)
Panel 2
Invincible's face, shocked
Normal DB Invincible
Wait!
HM Angry (low)
Panel 3
Portal closed
Normal DB Invincible
Maaaaaaan!
HM Angry (low)
Panel 4
Invincible looking down, shocked look on his face
Shocked DB Invincible
WHAT THE!
HM Angry (low)
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Page 18
Panel 1
Shot of Logan looking up, holding his hat to block the sun, squinting in annoyance/ pain/ curiosity, still sitting on the crate. Ground littered with bodies.
Normal DB Logan
Really not in the mood for…
HM Angry (low)
Panel 2
Same shot as Panel 1, only now there is a motion blur, paper/ dust/ debris and remaining clothing on bodies has moved as Invincible has swooped down and picked up Logan, neither are in the panel as he has done it so quickly.
SFX Wooooosh
HM Angry (low)
Panel 3
Shot looking down towards the ground, they are REALLY high up, Invincible holding Logan from under his arm pits, make it look kind of disorientating if possible
Normal DB Logan
…this
Angry DB Invincible
What have you DONE!
DB Logan
Anyone ever told you, you rush to conclusions bub…
…. And holding a guy like this is really uncomfortable
HM Angry (low)
Panel 4
Shot of a stone cold Invincible face
HM Angry (low)
Panel 5
Shot of a pissed off Logan face, shoulders near his ears because of how he is being held
Normal DB Logan
Now put me down, before I FORCE us down
HM Angry (low)
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Page 19
Panel 1
Annoyed/ confused/ angry look on Invincible's face
Normal DB Invincible
From this height you'd just kill yourself
Normal DB Logan
3…
HM Angry (low)
Panel 2
Pissed off look on Logan's face, almost fully healed now
Normal DB Invincible
Besides I doubt there's anything you could do to hurt me
Normal DB Logan
2…
HM Angry (low)
Panel 3
Smug look on Invincible's face
Normal DB Invincible
I'm guess you don't know, but I'm…
Normal DB Logan
1…
HM Angry (low)
Panel 4
Logan has a look of pain on his face as he has tried to stab Invincible with his claws (all six of them), but they have only caused a scratch and now they are protruding through the back of Logan's forearms as they have been pushed back into Logan incorrectly. A surprised look on Invincible's face. Looking side on, we can see the height thanks to the background scenery, slightly angled down from above Logan, his head is tilted back to show his face, has tried to stab invincible at rib height
Normal DB Invincible
… Invincible
Angry DB Logan
ARHHHHHHH!
SFX SNIKT!
HM Angry (low)
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Page 20
Panel 1
Invincible, confused/ shocked, Logan's arms are dangling, blood is pouring from the wounds, claws slowly sliding out and back into place as they heal
Normal DB Invincible
Geez man, what're you doing! That almost hurt! Are you trying to fall to your death?
Wounded DB Logan
*Pant* I'm *Pant* Tougher than I look *Pant*
HM Normal
Panel 2
Logan has brought his feet up to Invincible's chest
Normal DB Invincible
Huh?
HM Normal
Panel 3
Long draw distance, Logan has jumped out of Invincible's grasp and is falling backwards to the ground, blood still falling to the ground. Invincible is covered in blood as well.
Wounded DB Logan
*grunt*
HM Normal
Panel 4
Same shot as Panel 3, but a streak of blue and red has shot across the panel on a diagonal arc and taken Logan with it, Invincible is still floating in the same place.
SFX Fssshhhhh
HM Normal
Panel 5
Logan being placed down by a hunched over Superman, Logan's arms look mostly healed now, just severe bruising and a bit of raw/ still healing skin here and there. Superman is looking skywards.
Normal DB Superman
If you can hold out, I'll be back soon
Normal DB Logan
Wha…?
HM Normal
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Page 21
Panel 1
Long draw distance, can see Logan on the ground and a shot of red and blue streaking into the sky towards Invincible. Blood still falling and at the top of the streak is the torso of Superman with one arm thrust forward and the other in a cocked position by his side.
HM Normal
Panel 2
Superman uppercutting Invincible, pieces of Invincibles glasses go flying into the air, his mouth spraying saliva and blood
SFX
CRRrrrrrrRRACK!
Normal DB Invincible
Opfhh!
HM Normal
Panel 3
Superman's torso looking at us, finger pointing, angry look on his face, think Uncle Sam wants YOU but with Superman.
Angry DB Superman
So you defeated the the green hulking monster, destroyed the town and were about to send that poor man fall to his death. I don't know what game you are playing sir, but it ends now.
HM Normal
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Page 22
Panel 1
Shocked looked on a close up of Invincible's face
Normal DB Invincible
Whaaa...?
HM Normal
Panel 2
Side view of Superman attacking Invincible, right arm extended, left arm cocked, looks like he has pushed forward from a running stance, cape flying back, Invincible has dodged the blow and is flying backwards
SFX
Foooosh
HM Normal
Panel 3
Shot from below Logan looking up, we can see Logan has mostly healed and has found his cigar and has light it, above him in the sky is a blur of red and blue swirling with blue and yellow
HM Normal
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Page 23
Panel 1
Invincible has thrown an Uppercut squarely into Supermans abdomen.
Normal DB Superman
Ooopfhhh!
HM Normal
Panel 2
Invincible has now done a downward punch into S's neck
Normal DB Invincible
YARRRHHH!!
HM Normal
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Page 24
Panel 1
Long distance view, a red and blue streak straight into the ground with a puff of dust, Invincible in the position of only just having hit S.
HM Normal
Panel 2
Invincible's silhouette above Superman trying to crawl out of the crater
Normal DB Invincible
I don't know who or where we are, but I don't know who you are talking about and I don't want to fight you!
HM Normal
Panel 3
A crouched Logan, claws popped, smoke flying around, covering the necessary parts
Normal DB Logan
Sucks to be you then Bub
HM Normal
Panel 4
Logan has begun slashing at Invincible, by this shot he has already landed several blows ripping Invincibles uniform in several places and leaving paper cut claw marks on his skin
Angry DB Logan
RARRHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
SFX
Shink! ShinkShinkShink! Shink!
HM Normal
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Page 25
Panel 1
Superman has flown in between the two fighting men, a hand on each mans chest
Normal DB Superman
ENOUGH!
HM Normal
Panel 2
Logan and Invincible have backed up, all 3 are looking like they are ready to do battle once more
Normal DB Logan
Hmmm, Where about are you jokers from? I don't recognize the getups
HM Normal
Panel 3
Close up of Superman's face, calm now, looking left
Normal DB Superman
I'm Superman, from Metropolis. I WAS doing battle with one of my enemies Mister Mxyzptlk, when suddenly there was a flash of light and I was floating above your planet and town here
HM Normal
Panel 4
Close up of Invincible's face, calmer now, one broken eye lense and claw marks on his face, looking right
Normal DB Invincible
Umm, Earth, but this doesn't look like home, I figure I'm stuck here until Angstrom Levy pulls me back and sends me to another dimension, he's trying to wear me down... it's not working, and neither of you are going to do much about that... What about you Short Round n' Spikey
HM Normal
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Page 26
Panel 1
Closeup of Logan's face, cigar in between 2 finger's with smoke coming out of his mouth as he speaks
Normal DB
Bub, you don't wanna know much about me, but I'm a mutant, an X-man from up-state New York and that guy the boy scout here was duking it out with when he turned up was the Hulk; Bruce Banner, ugly mess of a problem when he gets pissed, who knows where he's gone now, but I can smell him from here, he's not that far away, we'd better go get him and work out what's happening around here before the locals start getting annoyed we trashed their town
HM Normal
Panel 2
Logan pulling on some new pants he has picked up from the rubble, Superman standing with his arms crossed and Invincible straightening his gloves
Normal DB Superman
Well, I can see him from here, he seems to have calmed down quite a bit... wait... do you hear that?
HM Normal
Panel 3
Long distance shot from atop a rocky mountain range, town in the distance, above the sky a classic style rocket flys past
Normal DB Invincible
I don't have super hearing
Normal DB Logan
Neither, what is it Supes?
HM Normal
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Page 27
Panel 1
Superman looking up, Logan doing up his old belt, cigar in mouth, hat on head
Normal DB Superman
More guests I'm guessing
HM Normal
Panel 2
Most of the page, the rocket lands on the mountain range overlooking the town
VFX
Rumble, ground shaking
HM Normal
Panel 3
Door open and the ladder extended
HM Normal
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Page 28
Panel 1
Superman looking towards the mountain range, Invincible prepared to fight and Logan scratching his hairy chest while puffing away on the cigar
Normal DB Superman
I think I'll go say hello to the new arrival, stay here, I'll be right back
HM Normal
Panel 2
Shot of the bottom of the ship and the ground with a pair of the Fear Agent's boots in the shot surrounded in a cloud of dust, in the background you can see the red and blue streak leading to Superman flying towards us.
HM Normal
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Page 29
Panel 1
The landed rocket ship, the rocky cliff and Heath Hudson standing looking prepared for anything, gun drawn, suit on, in the door frame is a computer monitor with Annie on screen
Normal DB Heath
Annie, any idea where we are now?
Fear Agent Origin Title Logo Text
Supposedly the last FEAR AGENT, Heath Hudson is a rugged, alcoholic Texan spaceman on the run from the powers that laid waste to his Home, his Family and his Planet. He works as an exterminator, taking care of the things that go bump in the night so you... or the aliens that hire him, don't have too.
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Panel 2
Close up on Heath's head, the gun is sticking up in shot
Normal DB Superman
Welcome, I do hope you have come in peace, is this a place you call home or are you stranded here as well?
Normal DB Heath
Huh?
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Page 30
Panel 1
Heath looking up at a floating Superman, confused look on his face, gun hap-hazardly pointing in S's direction
Normal DB
Yeaaaahhh, I don't think so... Annie, fire up the engines, we need to be outta here 10 minutes ago
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Panel 2
Heath scampering up the ladder, Superman just floating
SFX
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Panel 3
Superman floating in the same spot, cape and hair flapping in the blast, but the shot is from a downward angle further back and up and the rocket blasts off
SFX
Roooooaaaaaarrrrrr!
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Page 31
Panel 1
Heath's rocket is flying up towards space, it's path leaves a trail through the clouds below
Normal DB Heath
Annie, get us the hell outta here! I did not get paid today to go up against flying spacemen from unknown planets
Normal DB Annie
Baby, the least you could have done was ask where we were, now you're just going to get drunk and leave me with the mess to clean up
Normal DB Heath
That's why I love ya you beautiful AI
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Panel 2
Same shot, but now Heath's rocket is flying high above the planet, and is dodging a new purple, domed half destroyed and on fire spacecraft that has appeared out of nowhere, yellowy-green dusty debris is falling off is as it hurtles toward the ground
Normal DB Heath
What is the blue blazes!
Normal DB Annie
It appears to be another ship, it seems to have appeared out of some form or hyper-dimensional portal, attempting to hail now
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Page 32
Panel 1
Back on the planet, atop the mountain range opposite the one Superman is still floating above and where Heath's rocket just left. A Golden Shimmering figure appears with two golden circles above and below him
Normal DB Master Chief
Cortana, where are we?
Normal DB Cortana
I don't know Chief, but I suggest you get ready, we were followed, and I'm picking up life signs below
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Panel 2
Full shot of Master Chief, gun in hand, back to the town atop the mountain range, looking up and overhead the Covenant ship is crash landing while spewing wreckage and flood spores in a debris trail as it heads towards the planet
Normal DB Master Chief
Friend or Foe?
Normal DB Cortana
Unknown, attempting to interface with local frequencies and satellite uplinks. I suggest recon and Minimal contact until we know more.
Halo Origin Title Logo Text
John 117 is the Master Chief. Believed to be the sole survivor of the UNSC's Spartan 2 project from the Planet Reach. Stolen by Dr Catherine Halsey as a 5 year old child and trained to be a soldier more capable than an entire army, he is on a mission to infiltrate and capture a Covenant ship vital to saving Earth from a galaxy spanning threat and stop multi-year war. Aided by the Smart AI clone of Dr Halsey herself, the AI named Cortana is the Master Chief's on-board intelligence gathering partner, together they must complete their mission no matter the costs, having been trapped the last 3 months on the ring-world called Halo fighting all manner of enemies, they have found themselves teleported here by what appears to be mistake.
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Page 33
Panel 1
Shot from behind the Hulk, who is sitting, hurtling towards him from in front and above is the Covenant ship
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Panel 2
Long distance shot. The Ship has an explosive landing atop the Hulk
HM HULK PISSED
For anyone reading, this is a fun little side project I’m working on when warming up for my other stories. I’ll be releasing it as a free webcomic once it is fully drawn/coloured and lettered.
Enjoy. Feel free to let me know what you think, good and bad
It's the script for the first 33 pages of a web comic I'd love to find the time to draw, if anyone wishes to take a crack at any of the Panel's/Pages, feel free.
The bottom of every panel and splash page has Bruce Banner’s heart rate/ blood pressure monitored to show his levels of stress
All rights are reserved to the creator of each character, this is merely a piece of Fan Fiction fun.
Enjoy. Feel free to let me know what you think, good and bad
It's the script for the first 33 pages of a web comic I'd love to find the time to draw, if anyone wishes to take a crack at any of the Panel's/Pages, feel free.
The bottom of every panel and splash page has Bruce Banner’s heart rate/ blood pressure monitored to show his levels of stress
All rights are reserved to the creator of each character, this is merely a piece of Fan Fiction fun.
© 2012 - 2024 LukeBatt
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